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Creative Writing: Tremel's Home

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Inside of Tremel’s office stood a dark-skinned girl with a striking resemblance to the Overseer. It was safe to assume that she was the daughter of Tremel. She wasn’t anything amazing to look at with dark hair and eyes and three long scars marring her face.

“Good, you’ve returned. You seem to be in one piece. Tell me, how do you like your new blade?” Thaelys fingers stroked the end of her warblade as she answered the Overseer.

“It will suffice.”

“What’re you doing, Father? I’ve only just got my warblade and I’ve been here six months” The Overseer’s daughter looked furious, most likely feeling like a second hand acolyte.

“I have my reasons, Eskella. And you will not breathe a word to this to anyone. Do you hear?” Thaelys slightly when she …show more content…
Yes, Father.”

“Acolyte Thaelys, this is Eskella, my daughter. She’s one of the advanced students here. On her way to becoming Sith. If she minds herself.” Thaelys was unimpressed. Eskella may have been an advanced student but she was clearly a weak fighter. She had excess weight on her and lacked muscles. She was neither strong nor quick on her feet. Thaelys deduced she was Shii-Cho as her main form.

“I’ll keep quit about your new charge, Father. But I won’t be there if whatever you’re planning blows up in your face.” And with that comment, Eskella left Tremel’s office and Thaelys was left alone with her …show more content…
She’s just sore that I’m keeping secrets. She growls but she’s loyal. Now, I thought I heard Vemrin’s voice in the adjacent chamber before you arrived. Did he make his move so soon?”

‘Yes he did and I am more than ready to murder him in his sleep. Maybe I can chop of his limbs or decapitate him. Maybe poison is more humane. Better yet, I can put explosives in his room and watch him blow his annoying face off’

“Yeah, I hate him already,” ‘That’s one way to put it’, “I look forward to ending his miserable existence.’

“If things go well, you will have that satisfaction someday.” ‘Hopefully tonight’

“Still, I’d hoped we’d have more time. Vemrin’s not the type to sniff around for too long before trying to take a bite.” ‘What kind of bullshit euphemisms does this Overseer use? Like holy shit, just say that Vemrin doesn’t wait long before trying to kill someone, saves you a lot of words. Moron’

“In a drive for sheer numbers, the criteria for Academy admittance has been relaxed. Now anyone with Force sensitivity is allowed entrance. Vemrin is mixed blood. The invisible rot eating at the foundation of the Empire. He must not be allowed to advance.”

“So you’re an elitist snob.”

“You say that like it is a bad thing.” ‘Because it is. I swear to the Gods that you are an

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