Elizebeth Geroge Spear has crafted a story with great vocabulary usage. Her vocabulary usage made the story more understandable. “He could see now that the man had had his mind set on that gun from the moment he laid eyes on it.” She used descriptive words to create good imagery along with making it very understandable. “That was mighty tasty, son. Mighty tasty.” Her word choice was very understandable and it gave me a clear understanding on what was going on at that moment because she knew when to use the words. In general, she has done a very amazing job at crafting almost every part of the book with great vocabulary usage.
The author has also crafted the story with great realistic action scenes. She makes action scenes more realistic than not. Almost everything she writes sounds really realistic. “Saliva and blood dribbled down from the open jaws.” She used descriptive words to describe what was happening and she made it so that it made sense. She uses descriptive words like dribbled which describes how the blood is falling out of the bears open jaws.“The bears sides …show more content…
“It was then that he noticed. His father’s rifle was not hanging over the door.” The author makes me seem as I’m actually in the story because she makes it seem like the character is actually doing what she is saying. And it creates great imagery in my head. Like, “It was then that he noticed.” that creates an image in my head of Matt actually realizing that the rifle was gone. She describes the characters thoughts really well too. “That night he and the dog feasted on crackling bits of roast meat.” In this sentence, the author does extremely well at describing what is currently going on right now. She uses words like feasted, and crackling to describe what the dog is doing. In my head, it creates an image of a dog eating meat and the meat being crisp. Finally, she has crafted many parts throughout the whole book that I enjoy and