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The journey of my writing

Writing is a beautiful thing. There are like rainbows rare majestic and transparent. Good writing is rare and majestic because the reader understands exactly the point of view that the writer is trying to convey. They are also transparent because the writers meaning can be hidden through symbolism, irony or even syntax. However good writing is a process just like anything else. It takes time to tone your skills and develop your writing.
My writing is no exception. There are many things I need to develop. It has considerably grown from when I first started writing in 4th grade till now.
My first writing was a fictional story we had to come up with. IU wrote about being trapped on an island that was surrounded by sharks. It sounds pretty easy however it was not. My story did not flow throughout for example as I crashed down and swam towards the island there were sharks. There is no transition from the crash to sharks. For a 4th grader trying to write a simple story was hard.I was a beginner in wrting. Many teachers were surprised at my writing skill. I was a bookworm and was well above my reading level. Being able to read high level was suppose to increase your writing skills or that’s what I believed. But that did not happen to me. The teachers and myself kept asking how can I be such a good reader but not a good writer. That question used to mistify me, I could not figure out the answer for that. I kept reading higher level books and still that didn’t help, I also read books recommended to me by teachers but that also didn’t help. What could possibly be wrong maybe I was an exception to the saying.

Just recently I found the answer to my question. It turns out I was not reading critically. I was reading for reading and not understanding. However understanding is the main point of reading. I hope to increase my skills with this

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