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Sea world is a great place, there are many things to watch seeing many animals you would never see up close and everyone enjoying themselves filled with joy except this is not true this is far from it but there are two sides to the story as not everyone at seaworld enjoys themselves behind the tricks and shows are imprisoned animals being forced to perform tricks who were taken away from their natural home as young. Seaworld is not a place where these animals should be held they should be in their natural homes and should've never been taken in the first place.

“Sea world” the name sounds amazing but in reality it's far from “sea” world. These animals for example the orcas are held in tanks that are //// ///////. these sizes are not suitable for orcas as they would normally have the whole sea to roam about but are limited to these small tanks. 62 orcas have died at sea world and not one of them was from old age but still they continue to keep the …show more content…
Tilikum has lived in captivity for almost 33 years and 24 years of it has been spent at seaworld Orlando Florida. He was about 36 years old over this 36 years he has taken the lives of 3 people, the first person was a trainer at sealand of the pacific in 1991, the next death was at seaworld in 1999 when someone stayed late at night and jumped into the tank with Tilikum and was killed and the final death was a well known trainer at seaworld in 2010, so how did this unknown orca at the age at 2 change the way people look at keeping these animals in captivity and how it became the killer for 3 people well it was the separation from his family, the small tanks,boredness all which led to his grown aggression towards trainers and to cause the death of 3 people and now after Tilikums imprisoned life he died at the age of about 36 due to a bacterial lung

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