The fourth rhetorical strategy I used in my descriptive was sentence structure. In my positive paragraph, my sentence structure was “I think Ridgewater College cafeteria is a suitable place for everyone when taking time off to eat and relax”. After rewriting the sentence structure, the passage became “when taking time off to eat and relax, Ridgewater College cafeteria is a suitable place for everyone.” When I rearranged that I just made the passage more positive, and the part that I want to show the readers became more showable at the end. In my negative paragraph, the sentence structure I had was “pointless pool tables are there which makes student’s waste their homework during their off time.” After the change, it became “instead of doing