ENTRY 1
Two paragraph with topic sentences in 2 different locations.
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Topic Sentences: One of the leading causes of chronic illness today is inflammation. One of the leading causes of chronic illness today is inflammation. And studies continue to show that refined sugars, processed flours, vegetable oils, and many other nasty ingredients commonly found in processed foods are largely responsible for this inflammation epidemic. So the next time your body craves a candy bar or a box of cheese crackers, consider the fact that heart disease, dementia, neurological problems, respiratory failure, and cancer have all been linked to the chronic inflammation caused by processed food consumption.
Source: http://www.naturalnews.com/039743_processed_foods_eating_reasons.html#ixzz42Lt7h2AN

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Topic Sentences: The key is to eat the right foods that will power you up instead of slowing you down. The secret to eating for weight loss might seem elusive but it doesn’t have to be complicated or unrealistic. The key is to eat the right foods that will power you up instead of slowing you down. A low-fat, plant-based diet, without meat, dairy, or eggs, can help prevent issues like bloating, indigestion, and overall weight gain. You’ll get all the vitamins and nutrients – like fiber and fat – that you need from a wide variety of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, beans, and legumes that make up a balanced, wholesome diet. Healthy fats like oils are also a beneficial part of the diet but should be kept at a minimum.
Source: http://www.doctoroz.com/article/how-eat-negative-calorie-plan

ENTRY 2
2 paragraph with different strategies of supporting details.
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Strategy of supporting detailed: Statistics According to statistics released by the US Census Bureau in 2011, the official poverty rate in the United States increased to 15.1% or 46.2 million people. The Census Bureau relies on predetermined thresh- old income figures, based on family size and composition, adjusted annually for inflation to determine the poverty level. Families whose income falls below the threshold level are considered poor. For example, in 2010 a family of four was considered poor if their annual income fell below $22,314. When workers earn less than $10 or $15 per hour, it is often difficult, if not impossible, for them to meet their families’ needs. Moreover, increasing numbers of families are facing the challenge of finding suitable child care arrangements that enable the adults to work long hours and/or through the night to maintain an adequate income level. New information technology has led to more business operating 24 hours a day, creating real challenges for workers on the night shift, especially those with children.
Source: Contemporary Management, Gareth R. Jones, Jennifer M. George, Mc Graw Hill Education, 2014

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Strategy of supporting detailed: Example Every organization has tasks for which specific , inflexible procedures work well. For example, completing travel reimbursements, processing orders, and posting organizationwide announcements are conducted more efficiently when everyone follows the same process-regardless of experience, position in the organization, or level of expertise. However, as beginners, we cannot stay stuck in a rigid approach forever if we want to advance to the next step. Strictly following traditional procedures helps beginners fit in a new organization, but if they do not explore alternatives, they will remain relatively low-level performers.
Source: 5 Steps To Expert, Paul G. Schempp, Davies-Black Publishing, 2008

ENTRY 3
2 paragraph with different strategies of introduction
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Strategy of introduction: Problem-Solution Food loss is food disposed despite being still edible. According to an agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries Ministry estimate in 2012, 6.42 million tonnes among the 28 million tonnes of leftover food produced annually in Japan is regarded as food loss. Half the food loss volume is produced by food operators, including manufacturers and retailers. The rest is produced by households. This includes leftovers and food thrown away without being touched. Stickers encouraging customers to buy clearance items are aimed at reducing the amount of food thrown away and recipes to help consumers use up foodstuffs are posted online. Such efforts are designed to make consumers think twice about their shopping habits or cooking methods and reduce the amount of food discarded by households, which makes up about half of all such waste.
Source: Don’t throw out food that are still good to eat, Sunday Mail, March 13 2016

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Strategy of introduction: Defiition/Explanation Anorexia nervosa is an eating disorder that affects about 1 in 100-200 girls or women in the United States. A person with this disorder limits eating and by definition weighs at least 15% less than his or her ideal weight. At least 90% of cases are in women and the disorder usually begins in adolescence. The weight loss may delay the onset of menstruation or stop it once it has started, Anorexia nervosa rarely occurs before puberty or after age 40. And, although relatively rare, it can occur in men.
Source: http://www.womenshealthmag.com/health/anorexia-nervosa

ENTRY 4
2 paragraph with different strategies of conclusion.
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Strategy of conclusion: Suggestion This leadership team understood that self-awareness as a leader comes from understanding the perspectives of those we lead and serve. Our learning can start with our own insight but it can’t end there. To become intentional Multipliers, we must understand how our best intentions can be translated and received differently by others.
Source: The Multiplier Effect, Liz Wiseman, Lois Allen, Elise Foster, SAGE Publications Ltd, 2013

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Strategy of conclusion: Prediction Although many people around the world use social networking, it should only be used as a tool. Social networking aides long distance communication greatly but there must be a stopping point. It cannot become our main form of communication and interaction. There are positives to this new technology but nowhere do these positives outweigh the negatives. If we continue overusing the aid of these sites, then it will keep effecting our communication, self-expression, bullying, isolation, friendship and humanity in negative ways. There is nothing that can substitute for personal interaction. Social networking is the problem and we must eliminate its overuse for the sake of our future.
Source: http://www.teenink.com/nonfiction/academic/article/485925/The-Effects-of-Social-Networking-upon-Society/

1 paragraph with a number of cohesive devices
Cohesive devices: In addition, furthermore, another, finally In conclusion, this essay explored the effect of the internet on people's lives in the last decade and found that the advantages of the internet far overshadow the disadvantages. It found the internet has had positive effects on family life, allowing the hands on parenting of pre-school children by those parents who are able to use the internet to work from home. In addition, it has reinforced the extended family by harnessing email and social networking sites as a means to stay in direct contact. Furthermore, blogs, chat rooms and video links have offered an alternative to attendance at religious services, which have suffered such rapid decline in recent times. Another positive effect of the internet is its ability to re-assert national identity, particularly for those living abroad, as they retain remote access to the home culture by being able to download or stream current affairs or local drama. Finally, the internet enhances multiculturalism by offering an alternative to mainstream media representations of the norm to those who identify as 'the other'. Arguments which support the negative impact of the internet on people's lives in the 21st century focus on very narrow aspects and fail to acknowledge the broad range of benefits the internet has borne on contemporary society.
Reference: http://learnline.cdu.edu.au/studyskills/studyskills/sampleessay.html