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Student, overall, you need to review chapter 15 on developing and writing analytical reports. You have some good information; however your report should be in professional business format and style. You need to use at least one or two supporting figures. Also, you are missing your letter of transmittal and your list of six references. Please review my comments within your report.

Missing Letter of Transmittal.

Information Technology Career Paths
Recommendations and explanations of I.T. career paths for college students

Student Last Name
Job Title
Energy Company
2222 East San Louis Pkwy
Hewitt, Texas 77032

Contents
Review Chapter 15 of your text for correct format. Also, review the sample format for a TOC in Week Six Questions and Concerns thread.

Executive Summary……………..………………………………………………………………….iv

Introduction…………………………………………………………………………….………………1

Diversity is Key………………………………………………………………………….………….....2

What is my passion……….……………………………………………………………….…………2

Conclusion……………………………………………………………………….………………………2

Recommendation…………………………………………………………………….……………….2

Executive Summary

This report analyzes [Avoid anthropomorphisms (attributing human characteristics to nonhuman or inanimate objects). Consider that no report can "analyze."] the differences between an executive management career and a technical career in the information technology field. Diversity Is Key To a Healthy Career There are as many different [Redundancy: if you have "many," surely they are "different." Remove "different"] information technology job titles as there are flavors of ice cream but finding the right job at the right company takes time. The burnout rate among information technology professionals is high and unfortunately it is easy to accomplish. Finding diversity in job...

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