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In today’s society, many people view marriage as an obsolete and outdated tradition or relic from old times. However, marriage is still one of the most valuable institutions we keep in many cultures. Marriage doesn’t mean simply living with a spouse; in fact, it is our instinct of creating a family, which is the most basic unit that comprises our society. In order to make family, marriage is essential. As today’s society becomes more liberal and opened, numerous couples prefer co-habitation with their partner rather than getting married. The problem is many people take the idea of marriage lightly, thinking it is either unnecessary or outdated. However, marriage still has so valuable aspects in a human life: couples can share their property or obtain legal rights in making important decisions, created emotional, support and helped in up growing of young child’s’

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Topic Sentence: Does marriage has relevance in today’s society?

Supporting Detail: The problem is that many people take the idea of marriage lightly, thinking it is either unnecessary or outdated. However, marriage still has valuable aspects in a human life.

Evidence: A survey conducted by the Sun in “United Kingdom 65% of the U.K says marriage has helped male especially to have more money than a single man and more stable economic wise.”

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Supporting Detail 2: Marriage has created an emotional support.

Evidence: According to one survey, due to the emotional support they get, married people tend to live substantially longer and fall ill less often compared to individuals who never marry in their lives.

Clincher: Do you really think that Marriage in today’s society has died out?
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Supporting Detail 3: Marriage has helped in the rearing of a child or Children in today’s society.

Evidence: the father ensures discipline, general guidance and physical security for the children, the mother offers them soft emotions such as tenderness, intimacy and affection.

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Over the years; Marriage has proved to helped beneficial to the society in numbers of ways. The benefits are the rearing of children, emotional support the list goes on. It also recognized highly in the world. People have different views but in reality in all come down marriage the world need it traditional marriage we need it.

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Marriage is the only institution that allows two people to establish a very strong and enduring relationship that is fully backed by the law and society as a whole. This is the main reason why the institution of marriage has been around for so long. While has it negatives it has its positive. Marriage will be around until the end of time because we are humans we need to feel special and that’s simple.

Reference Page:

1. http://www.iguides.org/articles/articles/832/1/Importance-of-Marriage-to-Society/Page1.html 2. Defending Traditional Marriage: It Starts with You by Willard Harley 3. www.yahoo answers.com 4. www.googlesearch.com