Week 8: Revising and Editing the Essay
Write a paragraph of 150- to 300 words that summarizes the editing changes recommended by Write Point and by my feedback on last week’s rough draft.
After reading both feedbacks, I saw where I made many common mistakes. for example missing words ,I used the words like you and you’re a whole lot, I also saw where I had a lot of spelling words .but when it comes to Making sure that I follow APA formatting for this paper’s i have to remember to always review the APA formatting guidelines. For example, my paper should have a title page and be double-spaced. I also have to remember not to use caps in the middle of a sentence. One tip that I was given with the write point is that when it comes to academic writing I must avoid starting a sentence with a conjunction. When it comes to punctuation, I have to try my best to leaving a space before a comma. The feedback is very important for the outcome of my paper. It helps me to see the mistakes that I made and what direction I need go in to correct it.

Write a second paragraph of 150- to 300- words that summarizes the next steps to be taken in the revision process, according to my feedback from last week as well as the Plagiarism Checker (Turn It In) report. Be sure to consider the following revision questions and provide examples to support each response:
Each of the topic sentence directly address the thesis as well as the state of topic. When it comes to each of the paragraph, I have really added an effective closing that I believe really reinforces my main point. I feel that my essay does flow from beginning to the end I kept my readers in mind. When it comes to my supporting logical, I feel that I have put it in an effective way. The essay does provide strong evidence that support my opinions. For every part of my essay, it does reflect the evidence and the importance