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Personal Narrative: Brown Jug's Cabin

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I, as a second grade girl, had never seen something so gross, foul smelling of something decaying through the crisp summer breeze in Wisconsin, and seeing blood splatter everywhere throughout the little cabin that my family was staying at. Going through the little cabin, finding more disgusting things about it like seeing cockroaches scurrying around the wooden floors. I knew this was going to be the horror of all vacations.

Knowing that family had a problem as soon as we got out of the Ford red mini van that this place is a disaster like a tornado went through it. Soon after getting out of the car smell foul scent of the lake water and seeing a sign that was stating, “Beware pregnant, elderly, and young children do not eat the fish that …show more content…
When we first walk in there were no doors what so ever just curtains in the doorways for doors. My mom spoke in a sarcastic tone, “ Great privacy this place has”. Walking throughout the rest of the house seeing the small dingy bathroom with plumbing coming out of the walls and seeing holes everywhere and scum of the water on the shower walls. After looking at the mess in the bathroom and then saw the walls covered in blood, and in it's current state dried on the wall. Mom rushing everyone out of the bathroom in a disgust manner saying , “ That is the most disgusting thing I have ever seen ever more than the hospital. No one go into that bathroom until I wash it”. After that issue everyone else what to the tiniest sized living room that is about the size of a nice sized store bathroom. Dad muttered under his breath, “ I wonder what else is wrong with this dump”? After sitting down on uncomfortable on the furniture that was available. When sitting down on the couch was so uncomfortable whenever we were moving around hearing the crumply noise in cushions of the couch. Unzipping the cushion and saw crumple up pieces of newspaper inside under stead of the foam. When taking off the couch cushion and saw under the cushion there was trash, spit up food, and moldy food under the couch. After seeing all of this happening my whole immediate family went to Greulich`s and my Aunt …show more content…
After reporting the unhelpful Gray to call someone to fix the roof of the house. After that mess everyone went to breakfast and relax for the day, but the relaxing day meet going to fish yet again. After going out to the same spot we went yesterday and continue a relaxful day of fishing. During the fishing Lauren caught a bass, and was having a hard time to rile it in and end up losing her sunglasses in the murky lake water. After losing her sunglasses my dad was picking on her the whole time after this. He would keep telling her, “Could I use your sunglasses” or “Nice fish bait”. Continuing to fish on our relaxing day my dad ended up catching a catfish with the longest whiskers that keep moving and the pale greenish grayish tint to it scales and a long body. He was about to throw it into the lake when Lauren ask, “Do catfish have teeth” and “Can they bite”. We weren't sure if they had teeth or not so she tried it. The answer to the question is yes they have teeth and they do bite if you put your finger in a fish in it's mouth.Lauren ended up dropping the fish on the carpet of the pontoon and the catfish started flopping everywhere and it ended up leaving a pee puddle in the middle of the pontoons carpet. Until my Aunt Carol caught the

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