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Though it is not too far away from my home, the Auburn YMCA or any swimming facility has become my second home. I go there every single day except for Sundays, that's my day off. It has been my second home ever since I joined to swim team seven years ago.
Everyday after school I walk into the YMCA, slide my card and hear the ding that tells the computer that I am here and my card is still valid. I walk past the main gym while heading to the locker room and can hear the squeak of sneakers and can smell the odious and repellent smell of basketball players. Next comes the four steps that lead into the locker room. The lockers are green and the tile floors are green, brown, and white. You can smell the disinfecting spray the workers used to clean …show more content…
During sectionals everybody is cheering one another on and we all want each other to swim fast and get best times. Sectionals shows everybody that all of our hard work has payed off, including those terrible six A.M. practices twice a week. Some swim seasons are better than others but no matter how amazing or crummy we do our teammates are there for us. I love my teammates for celebrating with me when I do well or cheering me up when I am upset after a race. Sectionals is the time to show everybody what you're made of.
The day before sectionals I go to bed earlier than usual. I make sure my bag is all packed. Before I close my eyes to go to bed I think about my events and what i want to accomplish. I wake up the next day feeling confident and a little nervous at the same time. My team and I go to one bell of school and then we are off to Nottingham High …show more content…
The events I am swimming are the 50 yard freestyle, 100 yard freestyle, 200 yard freestyle relay, and the 400 yard freestyle relay. My best and first event is the 50 freestyle. Prior to going behind the blocks I warm up for five minutes to get my blood flowing. I have a quick pep talk with my coach then head to the blocks and put my game face on. There are a few heats before I swim so I get in the zone. I am ranked third and I either want to stay at third place or move up. I visualize my race, tell myself that I have trained and worked hard for this moment, and inform myself that I can do this. The official blows the whistle, my heat steps up on the blocks. I hear take your mark… BEEP! I dive into the cold water and immediately get goosebumps. I feel my kneeskin tighten to my skin and my body feels as light as a butterfly. I start doing fast and hard dolphin kicks then take my breakout stroke. My breakout propels my body out of the water and to the surface. I kick like a mad hatter and move my arms as fast as I can. I do my flip turn, kick fast dolphins, and then take another breakout stroke. As I breath see the girls kick in the lane next to me, Mariah Metcalf, she ranked first. I have a fast finish, my heart pounding out of my chest. I look up at the timing system and see I placed second by a hundredth of a second. I got a best time by .30 seconds also. A big smile appears on my

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