...I have learned that judgment is very important when evaluating. Evaluation is another important lesson that I have learned. This has also helped me become better at evaluating essays. Amitai Etzioni’s essay, Working at McDonald’s has helped me understand what evaluation simply is. Etzioni uses examples such as “McDonald’s is bad for your kids.” (par. 1) “We know that’s a strong topic sentence to start with. A few more examples are, “Closer examination, however, finds the McDonald’s kind of job highly uneducational in several ways. Far from providing opportunities for entrepreneurship (the lemonade stand) or self-discipline, self-supervision, and self-scheduling (the paper route), most teen jobs these days are highly structured — what social scientists call “highly routinized.” (par.6) “The hours are often long. Among those 14 to 17, a third of fast-food employees (including some school dropouts) labor more than 30 hours per week, according to the Charper-Fraser study. Only 20 percent work 15 hours or less. The rest: between 15 and 30 hours.” (par. 12) If we look at these few examples, we should have learned that he almost has a [powerful] topic sentence which follows detailed details after. Etzioni is trying to show his point that working at McDonalds is bad for your children. I have also learned from the first writing activity on page 254, that we would start of analyzing his writing. Then we had learned how to use factual details. On the next activity we had learned reasoning/shared...
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...March 25, 2014 Cognate Listing Sample IPS Integration Essay Cognate/Career Synthesis Paper: Incorporating a Christian Worldview MLA Presented in Partial Fulfillment INDS 400: Capstone John Doe Professor Sherman INDS 400-001 17 March 2014 Sample Cognate/Career Synthesis: Incorporating a Christian Worldview This final essay will synthesize chosen cognates with a view to career application with a Christian worldview. The first paragraph of your paper will be the introduction to your paper. The function of this paragraph is to obtain the reader’s interest, and should also present the content and context of your paper. It must tell your readers why you are writing the paper and why the topic is important. The final sentence of your introduction should be your thesis sentence. The thesis statement is the “point” of your essay, and is the idea that you will be supporting throughout the body of your paper. The paragraphs following your introductory paragraph will make up the body of your paper. An integrative device such as an analogy or metaphor must be used within the body of the essay as a vehicle for clarity. For example, an essay from a female with Business/Communications cognates could use the example of the Proverbs 31 woman. The very first page of your assignment should be a cover page that includes your name, course and section number, date, cognate listing, paper title, and chosen formatting style. Please note that this sample paper is formatted in MLA style;...
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...HUYNH PHUC HOANG SAMPLE ESSAY IELTS Writing Sample Essay IELTS Writing Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? The prevention of illness and disease is a challenging problem for any community. Although many people may be skeptical about the effectiveness of an investment in improving the environment and providing more housing for the public, I believe that it is a good solution to the issue, as will now be discussed. On the one hand, ameliorating environmental contamination can hinder the spread of disease and illness. Today, people’s health is deteriorating due to the adverse effects of poor air quality, making us more vulnerable to viruses and health problems. A number of urban citizens suffer from lung cancer and throat cancer due to the dangerous level of exhaust emissions from traffic and industrial activities in many big cities such as Beijing and Hanoi. Therefore, improving the environment should be treated as the top priority among other concerns of the government. For example, an outright ban on the use of private vehicles can decrease the amount of harmful fumes released into the atmosphere, contributing to the clean-up of the environment. On the other hand, the provision of more accommodation for the public is also a highly effective measure to reduce health risks....
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...A Sample Essay Name: Institution Affiliation: What do People reveal about themselves by the Way They Drive? People reveal much about themselves through the way they drive. The way a person drive is much more like the person's way of dressing that in turn reflects the person's habit, personality and, in general, his behavior. The way clothing reflects what one thinks and how one lives; behavior in the driver's seat gives a speedy however sensibly dependable manual for an individual's viewpoint and lifestyle. A driver who obeys traffic regulations carefully, for instance, is prone to be devoted to power, mindful of detail, decently directed in conduct, alarm, and aware of others' rights and safety. One may gather numerous different things too from watching a wary driver. Such an individual is opposed to going for broke. He or she presumably pays a low premium on collision protection, keeps the auto in great repair, and has no substance misuse issue that would take away from capable behavior. “One would expect this sort of individual to be reliable and even-minded in his or her general point of view” (Perrine, 2010). In any occasion, such attributes are steady with the identity of a single person with a driving record free of genuine infractions. An infrequent parking ticket is obviously normal in most circumstances and ought, not to get deciphered as an indication of ongoing carelessness or recklessness. The other extreme of behavior is the foolhardy...
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...www.platinumgmat.com | Free GMAT Prep GMAT Practice Questions | GMAT Study Guide | MBA Admissions GMAT AWA Sample Essay Analysis of An Argument "The recent surge in violence in the southern part of the city is a result of a shortage of police officers and an absence of leadership on the part of the city council. In order to rectify the burgeoning growth of crime that threatens the community, the city council must address this issue seriously. Instead of spending time on peripheral issues such as education quality, community vitality, and job opportunity, the city council must realize that the crime issue is serious and double the police force, even if this action requires budget cuts from other city programs." In the argument above, the author concludes that the city council is not doing its job well and needs to focus on expanding significantly the police force in order to combat recent growth in the level of crime. The premise of the argument is that crime is expanding while the city council focuses on ostensibly unrelated matters such as education reform. However, the argument is flawed because it falsely assumes that the city council’s efforts to improve quality of life are entirely unrelated to levels of violence and it assumes that the crime problem can be solved by merely increasing the police force. First, the argument wrongly assumes that issues of educational opportunity, community vitality, and job availability have no bearing on crime. However, the author fails...
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...disadvantages of the internet may outweigh the advantages. Topic: The internet Focus: The impact of the internet on people's lives Directions: Argue (present an argument) either in favour or against Scope: In the last decade View the following video and try out the interactive activity on how to analyse an assignment question. Taxonomy: the internet Sample essay Argue either in favour or against the impact of the internet on people's lives in the last decade. As an avenue of entertainment and communication, and as a research and reference tool, the internet has had a huge impact on the modern societies of developed nations. At the same time, there is concern that the disadvantages and negative influences may outweigh the benefits to the society. This essay argues that, in the last decade, the advantages of the internet far outweigh the disadvantages. This claim is addressed with the support of current authoritative sources which provide the framework for making such a claim. This essay first explores the effect of the internet on the social structures of family life, and religious and spiritual practice. Subsequently, this essay examines the repercussions of the internet on national cultural identity and multiculturalism. Firstly, in the last ten years, modern family life has been...
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...Job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. An employees’ overall satisfaction with their job is the result of a combination of factors like financial compensation and motivation are a few factors. This essay will discuss if money does affect motivation and make our jobs more enjoyable. Research of meta-analysis conducted by Tim Judge and colleagues of Journal of Vocational Behavior included 150,000 participants of ages 25 to 45 from different countries. This research was done in summer of 2013. The result indicated that the association between salary and job satisfaction is very weak. The reported connection indicated that there is less than 24 percent overlap between pay and job satisfaction levels. Furthermore, the connection between pay and pay satisfaction was only marginally higher, indicated that people satisfaction with their salary is mostly independent of the actual salary. A cross-cultural companion revealed that the relationship of pay with both job and pay satisfaction is pretty much the same everywhere for example, there is no significant difference between the US, India, Australia, Britain, and Taiwan. A similar pattern of result emerged when these researchers carried out group-level or between-sample comparison. The result showed that employees earning salaries in the top half of data range reported similar levels of job satisfaction to those employees earning salaries in the bottom half of the data range. According to...
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...说明 1. 本资料来源于英文版《How to get into the top MBA programs》,作者为Don Martin. 2. 第一部分为115份真实的ESSAY, 分别来自于17个不同背景的申请人. 3. 第二部分为对21个常见ESSAY问题的分析，包括问题的关键，常见错误，正确的回答方式. 个人认为这一部分比真实的ESSAY更重要. 4. 由于文件采用扫描和文字识别方法输入, 可能存在一些错误. 5. 此文件仅供CHASEDREAM网友参考使用, 请尊重原书版权, 切勿用于商业用途. Xiearmyxiearmy 零四岁末于美国穷乡僻壤 Chapter I Application Essay Examples INTRODUCTION This appendix contains 115 actual essays written, by 17 different applicants, for leading MBA programs. They address dozens of different essay topics. The applicants and their essays have been selected to give you the widest possible range of materials from which to profit. The first four applicants all applied to the University of Chicago. They were chosen by Chicago’s admissions director, Don Martin, according to my desire that they be from four very different people and of average quality for those admitted. In other words, these essays will show you exactly what you are competing against. They are of perfectly acceptable quality, but they should not discourage you. If you follow the lessons of this book you should be able to surpass each of these efforts. The second set of three applicants—Melissa, Doreen, and Carol—is taken from Columbia University’s files. Columbia’s admissions director, Linda Meehan, was asked to supply several applications, again from people of widely differing backgrounds, but this time of superior quality. I think that this group’s applications...
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...Great White Fathers By John Taliaferro History 1302 MW 9:00 a.m. The main idea of the book was obsession. It was an obsession that spanned many lives and many decades, and wore many names. In South Dakota, it was Doane Robinson, an historian and avid promoter of the state’s many virtues, along with Peter Norbeck, a native of the state who rose through the ranks of state government to the United States Senate, who wanted to bring the bountiful fruits of the tourism industry home. Then, there was the general obsession by the American people, or at least the wealthy and influential ones, to memorialize every great person or important event in American history. Finally, there was Gutzon Borglum himself, the sculptor of Mount Rushmore. His was a life of obsession from beginning to end. South Dakota was a beautiful place, but out of the way. It also had a seriously flagging economy. Robinson and Norbeck felt that by exploiting the natural beauty and history of South Dakota they could draw tourists from all over the country, and perhaps the world, into their backyard thus breathing new life into the economy. The problem was getting them there. They concluded that the Black Hills should be the centerpiece of their plan, with some sort of monument to the important figures of the region such as General George Custer, killed at Little Big Horn, along with Sioux heroes such as Sitting Bull or Crazy Horse. As the automobile began to weave itself into the fabric of American...
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...What we lose with the replacement of people by machines is some part of our own humanity. Even our mundane daily encounters no longer require from us basic courtesy, respect, and tolerance for other people. Perspective Two Machines are good at low-skill, repetitive jobs, and at high-speed, extremely precise jobs. In both cases they work better than humans. This efficiency leads to a more prosperous and progressive world for everyone. Perspective Three Intelligent machines challenge our long-standing ideas about what humans are or can be. This is good because it pushes both humans and machines toward new, unimagined possibilities. Essay Task Write a unified, coherent essay in which you evaluate multiple perspectives on the increasing presence of intelligent machines. In your essay, be sure to: • analyze and evaluate the perspectives given • state and develop your own perspective on the issue • explain the relationship between your perspective and those given Your perspective may be...
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...Assessments Below are the required assessments for participation in the Striving Reader Literacy Grant competition. SRCL funding can be used to pay for all assessments and administration of the assessments if necessary. The assessments must be given and data provided for the full five year performance period. Assessment | Purposes | Properties | Skills Measured | Test Frequency | Birth - Three | DP-3 | S | Yes | Dev. & function | 2 X per year | Four-Year Old | PALS-Pre-k | S, PM, O | Yes | AK, PA, CoP, OL | 3X per yr. | PPVT4 Form A/B | S, PM, O | Yes | V, OL | 2 X per yr. | CLASS | T-S interactions | Yes | Classroom | 1 X per yr | K-3 | DIBELS Next* | S, PM, O | Yes | AR, PA, ORF | 3 X per yr | IPI (K-2 as needed for small group instruction and RTI) | D | | Decoding | 3 X per yr (for internal purposes only) | 3-5 | SRI* | S, PM, O | Yes | RC-Inferential | 3 X per yr | CRCT | O | | ELA | 1 X per yr | 6-8 | SRI | S, PM, O | Yes | RC-Inferential | 3 X per yr | CRCT | O | | V, RC | 1 X per yr | 9-12 | SRI | S, PM, O | Yes | RC-Inferential | 3 X per yr | End-Of-Course Test | O | | ELA | 1 X per yr | K-12 | ACCESS for ELLs | S | ...
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...The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. [pic] The graph shows people using new music places on the Internet in fifteen days period of time namely personal choice and trendy pop music.The overall trend shows fluctuation with slight Increased towards the end of the period. Starting with Music Choice websites; 40,000 people went on this new site on first-day. Half of them backed out the next day. In Contrast to this Pop Parade net sites were visited by 120,000 music lovers on day one which decreased slightly on the next day thereafter regaining the same fame on 3rd day. After 3rd day the enthusiasm for both music lines on Internet dropped slowly- reaching maximum fall of 40,000 on 7th day. Whereas Music choice gained popularity, slightly Improving to get the original strength of 30,000 viewers on screen, but was getting still less visitors than their opponent Pop group i.e. 40,000 on day 7. In the beginning of the next week both gained remarkable recovery after a few fluctuations for 8th and 9th day having 40,000 and 50,000 visitors respectively, reaching to their peaks of one and a half thousand new viewers for Pop Parade on 11th day showing a contrast of very few people visiting Music choice for the same day. Thereafter Music choice gained popularity on 12th day for having more than 120,000 new visitors on web. In the end of the period Pop...
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.../ No (please delete as applicable) STUDENT NAME: Ann E Body STUDENT NO: 00000 NAME OF MARKER: B N Given DATE OF SUBMISSION: 01.01.01 ASSIGNMENT NO: 1 NO. OF WORDS: 1924 BIBLIOGRAPHY ENCLOSED: Yes/No (please delete as applicable) I declare that this work is my own and the work of others is acknowledged by quotation or correct referencing. I declare that this work has not been copied from another student(s) past or present at this or any other educational institution, or from any other source such as the internet. Name: Ann E Body Date: 01.01.01 Please write the essay title in FULL below: Montessori saw movement as a harmonising factor in the child’s development. Explain how the underpinning ethos of the prepared environment facilitates a balance between the mental and physical energies of the child. This essay will examine the way in which the principles of the prepared environment aim to support the child’s mental and physical development, particularly during the sensitive period for movement. The ethos of freedom will be considered, as well as the relationship between movement and the intellect with regard to aspects such as exploration and concentration. The Montessori classroom should provide specially designed materials and purposeful activities which help the children to develop essential motor and cognitive skills. Since the child’s ultimate aim is to achieve autonomy, the prepared environment should facilitate...
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...The short story ‘An Act of God’ by Gary Crew raises the issues about the choice between life and death and the moral dilemma involved in making critical decisions that may impact on the future. In the story, a decision needs to be made to either end the life of a woman in pain or leave her to die through natural causes. Point of view, language and the use of gaps/silences in the text encourage readers to question the validity of the doctor’s decision to take the life of a young boy’s mother trapped under a fallen beam in a church about to be consumed by fire after a devastating earthquake. Therefore the short story ‘An Act of God’ by Gary Crew touches on the controversial issue of euthanasia and encourages readers to question their own attitudes towards the right to life. The story is narrated from the point of view of a police officer who is ‘on the beat’ when a devastating earthquake hits a small town. This subjective account allows readers to gain a personal insight into the moral dilemma the doctor and young boy are faced without becoming emotionally involved in the events. Although a character involved in the action, the police officer’s comment after the young boy is told about an injection that can put his mother to sleep reads like a clinical police report, ‘The son sat there mute’. Thus the narrative point of view although first person, does not provide readers with an emotional opinion on this choice and therefore allows readers to make their own judgements about...
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