Introduction [Writing suggestion: Avoid using "intro" or "introduction" if this is a subtitle. At the beginning of the essay, the following could be nothing else] One of the biggest concerns in today’s society relates to security in internal IT and e-commerce applications. Security is handled by passing and transactions between client browser and Internet server entering a secure site. The client browser is passed a public key by which transactions between client, and the web is encrypted. The process of monitoring security plays a vital function in any organization’s computer use both internally and externally.
Security Organization Within a secure organization the business structure can cover a system of financial control, such as payroll, human resources, inventory, and general ledger vary the variety of agencies of the organization may be enhanced. Vulnerabilities in organizations will diminish, staff may be eliminated and so will duplications of work within departments, monetary information can stay secure, and most customer service may be better.
Internal IT Internal IT is a beneficial service such as, compliance with federal and state laws, add valve to an organization’s internal control. Safeguarding the organization assets, and risk management just to name a few, mainly deals with computer applications monitors and manages employee’s activities, for instance it more of a help desk, side services, or a desk-side service infrastructure and application support. . [Writing suggestion: If this sentence is as long as 50 or more words, it can be confusing with logic twists, recursions, or long lists. Cut it into shorter sentences featuring one idea. Shorter sentences are easier to comprehend] The computerized information system uses automated procedures to report transactions, and initiate records. As any applications there are some risks to be considered such as, identify thefts, secret misappropriation viruses, money thefts, and worms.
Security monitoring activities for Internal IT Information and Communication, Management Oversight, and the Control Culture, Monitoring, Risk Assessment, Evaluation, and Control Activities are classifications of internal controls. Using the monitoring system, one can assure the privacy of data. Assigning roles as needed, to address administrative tasks defined in the procedures will be followed. Establishing security management policies and controls and monitor compliance, assign roles, and responsibilities based on skills, assess information risks, collaborated information security staff is known as Information Security coordination. (You brought up some great ideas!)
E-Commerce
“Selling and buying of goods and services on the Internet, especially the World Wide Web” (Search CIO, 2005), is known as E-commerce (electronic commerce or EC). The Internet has a vital aspect of come is it is known currently as E-commerce. Electronic commerce is the leader in the business world as long there are consumers will to do transactions via Internet security monitoring will always be needed in today’s world. (Where are your recommendations; part 3 of the paper?)
Security monitoring activities for E-commerce Tracking the use of software applications, monitoring programs, and Internet usage on organizations employees on who is doing what, time, what they were doing at the time is part of corporate monitoring. Why is this (rewrite-informal!) system monitoring for e-commerce important because it keeps a log of various activities and system has three main concepts such as, availability, confidentiality, and integrity. “Confidentiality allows only authorized parties to read protected information” (IBM, 2005). “Integrity ensures data remains as is from the sender to the receiver” (IBM, 2005). “Availability ensures you have access and are authorized to resources” (IBM, 2005). (Quotes need the page or paragraph #.) (Where is your summary? Do not bring up new material in the summary. What is the single most important thing you learned in this lesson?)

References (Great to include 2+ but they need to be in APF format; indent line 2 of each, where is the balance of the reference? See our Course Materials forum for examples.) http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/websphere/library/techarticles/0504_mckegney/0504_mckegney.html http://pdf.usaid.gov/pdf_docs/PNADQ100.pdf
http://www.networksolutions.com/education/what-is-ecommerce