...Areas! Essay Submission ( Paragraph development ( Career Writing APA Formatting With Smarthinking, you can ▪ Use Drop In Tutoring and interact with a live tutor. ▪ Submit your Writing for any class to the Writing Center. Writing Support Tips: Essay Submission: Use this option under the Writing Center to submit 1 – 10 page essays for review. We will focus on providing feedback that you can apply to become a better writer! Essay Submission – 1 hour Essay: Use this option under the Writing Center to submit papers longer than 10 pages. For Graduate Writing it’s suggested you submit things like thesis and dissertation work by chapter or section. Our goal is to return these essays within 24 hours. Paragraph Development: Use the paragraph submission area to submit paragraphs and focus on the development of your paragraphs, including the introduction, conclusion, and transition sentences. APA Formatting: You can receive help with APA formatting by either using Drop In Tutoring to go over the citations and references you’ve worked up, or when you submit an essay under the Writing Center you can ask the tutor for APA formatting help. If there is a specific APA formatting issue you struggle with let them know! Don’t forget! • Writing submissions are returned to the Personal Archives on your Smarthinking homepage. • Our goal is to return your submissions within 24 hours, there are times that it will take...
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...Men and Women’s Shopping Concept For Women, shopping can be a very fun experience, especially sometimes when we see any sales on the item that we’ve been wanting for a long time and buy. There is a little different for men, because most men find shopping is boring and they don’t like to walk through a crowed mall. The first difference is women are very hesitant when they comes to shopping, because we can not make up our minds about what we want to get, or what we like. Men always look like know what they want to buy and need then pick only that item up. Ladies can take hours to getting one item, while men can get three items in 10 minutes or maybe less. Women spend more money than men because women want everything that they see. Men and women are really different in shopping concept. First, women are hesitant when shopping but men are not. A woman goes into a store with every plan on getting one item. When a woman sees all lovely things at a store, she wants to buy them all, and sayings “buy me.” But when she go to other store sees other cute things, she wants to buy that too. That is why a woman can be very hesitant. When a man says that he’s going to buy one thing from the store, it’s a guarantee that he will come home with that item because things do not scream out at him, “buy me”. Secondly, a woman always can take longer time to shop that a man does. A lady has to look at everything she finds appealing to the eye. Some women knows when they go shopping are for a pair...
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...Smarthinking: How to Submit a Writing Sample Throughout your program, you have access to free tutoring services and writing critiques through Smarthinking. This guide walks you through the steps for submitting a writing sample for feedback. Step 1: Access Your Smarthinking Account 1. Go to Smarthinking to log into your account. You can also access the service through Academic Tutoring on iGuide. 2. Enter your username and password. • If you are creating an account for the first time, enter the username: capella and password: helpnow. Then fill out the Registration Form and establish a new username and password. [pic] [pic] Step 2: Submit Your Writing 1. In the Writing Center section, choose the PSY5005 Writing option from the menu. [pic] 2. Complete each of the red sections of the Writing Form. Essay Submissions [pic] [pic] Step 3: Retrieve Your Feedback 1. You will receive an e-mail from Smarthinking when an e-structor has commented on your writing. 2. To retrieve your response (usually within 24 - 48 hours), go to your Personal Archive. Within the Personal Archive, there are filters to help you locate the e-structor response. [pic] 3. The e-structor response form will include comments on your essay organized by the areas in which you asked for help. [pic] 4. You will also find embedded comments from the e-structor [in bold and in brackets] throughout your writing...
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...Central Pennsylvania College IDS 105 – College Success Seminar Instructor: Rubina Azizdin Phone: 717-728-2351 (office) or 717-673-3644 ( Cell) May call or text. Email: rubinaazizdin@centralpenn.edu Hours: By Appointment Course Overview: This course introduces students to social issues in their major field of study. Historical and social topics are covered along with current events so students gain real world knowledge as it pertains to topics within their program of study. It provides a foundation for research and study within their chosen field as well as the basis for completing their degree requirements. Special topics for students returning to higher education are also covered in depth. Textbooks: IDS | 105 | College Success Seminar | Siebert, Al, and Karr, Mary. THE ADULT STUDENT’S GUIDE TO SURVIVAL AND SUCCESS. | Practical Psychology Press | 6E | 2008 | 9780944227381 | Course Expectations: 1. Actively participate in the course on a weekly basis, by turning in assigned homework, working in groups and adding to class discussions. 2. Reading assignments and completed homework are expected on time. 3. Exhibit common courtesy, respect, and classroom citizenship to all. (Please read Central Penn’s Big 8 Philosophies) 4. In order to meet credit requirements for this course, students will spend a minimum of two (2) hours each week completing assignments, reading, researching/writing papers, reviewing for examination or competencies, and other...
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...This essay will be about overcoming obstacles in your life. Life brings a lot of obstacles that gives adults trouble. I will talk about one of the obstacles that adults struggle with, that is emotional stress. Emotional stress is a very difficult obstacle to get over. You get to doubting yourself to the point where your mind don’t think straight so, you will not be able to do your work correctly. To get your mind on track you will have to start thinking positive thoughts and telling yourself that you can do what you set your mind to do. If you keep having negative thoughts you will end up failing everything you do. If you keep positive thoughts you will have a better outcome on your tasks. So, whatever you do in your life just remember to...
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...Harrington, A. (2012). Where there's a will, there's a way. Occupational ? Smartthinking provides some excellent resources for students. The website allows students to submit writing through their writing practice feature and receive virtually immediate feedback on errors (Smarthinking, n.d.). Students may also submit completed work to be read and reviewed by a live reader, and suggestions on readability, content development, and style will be offered in addition to spelling and grammar advice. Online tutoring sessions are available, allowing students to receiving one-on-one help with a tutor by scheduling online, or via chat on a drop-in basis. Offline questions allow students to send specific, short inquiries to tutors for help with areas of concern. Under academic resources, study guides and lessons are available in a wide variety of subjects, such as math, accounting, and writing. The number of resources and depth of help available make Smartthinking an invaluable resource for students. Although professors and other faculty are always available to help, having the resources of Smarthinking allows students to feel even more secure in the knowledge that help is always just a few keystrokes away. Reference Smarthinking. (n.d.). Retrieved March 03, 2016, from https://services.smarthinking.com/student/services/ ...
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...Due to an increase in mental illnesses in the workplace, Anna Harrington spoke on key elements in “Where there’s a will, there’s a way” that informs employee’s or employer’s about maintaining a positive outlook and a healthy mental state in the workplace(Harrington, 2012). Many of us have experienced trial and tribulations that have changed us as a person and our outlook on life. Although, at times things can be difficult when trying to accomplish a goal we push through with perseverance. Through those experiences, we learn our strengths and weaknesses to improve ourselves in every aspect. Working in a workplace with a diverse pool of personalities can be very challenging. As a Special Education Educator, I love working with children of all ages with disabilities which requires dedication and patience. As an employee, I had that part down but I had to learn to deal with many high strong personalities along with adapting to new an administration my third year in. With a new administration that lacks unity and support among other negative attitudes I learned to stay to myself outside of my group assignments. I had to realize that people are different and not everybody is a people’s person. I learned to control my emotions by learning patience, ignoring the negativity and not letting other people change my mood. As occupational health advisor Anna Harrison Stated, “ Organization is important to emotional control, as it allows the mind time and space to direct effort toward maintaining...
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...SmarThinking Assignment #1 Jonathan Garrett Keiser University Abstract “The student must do the learning” in my opinion is a true statement. A person can sit in class all day long listening to a lecture and still not have a clue as to what is going on. If one wants to retain knowledge and apply it, it is up to that person to learn and comprehend the material that is presented to them by the teacher. Understandably, there are times when one does not get the information right away. When this happens though, it is up to the student to find out why they are not comprehending and get the additional information that is needed to learn the material. Smarthinking Assignment #1 In “The Activity and Art of Reading,” the authors explain to us the difference between reading information and reading for understanding. In the book it says, “we must know how to make books teach us well.” When reading just for information there is no comprehension. When reading for understanding one comprehends the material and is able to apply the material. What do You Think of This Idea? “The student must do the learning” in my opinion is a true statement. A person can sit in class all day long listening to a lecture and still not have a clue as to what is going on. Sometimes our minds can drift off and the teacher starts to sound like Charlie Brown’s teacher. If one wants to retain knowledge and apply it, it is up to that person to learn and comprehend the material that is presented...
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...Time Management How successful you are as an online student is largely determined by how well you manage your time. Typically, students in an online program have many obligations including family, work, and a social life. It can become increasingly difficult to find time to study every day; therefore, good time management skills are incredibly important. Here are a few suggestions on how to manage your time effectively: First, you must determine when you are most ready to learn. This will be different for every person. Be sure to study when you are able to focus and not when you have other pressing matters on your mind. If you are not in the right mood to study, you will simply be wasting your time. Choose a time when you are most alert and focused. Second, create a schedule for yourself. One way to do this would be to make a tentative schedule for the day and then write down what you actually did and how you really spent your time. This will help you adjust and also find ways to eliminate time-wasting habits, like Facebook. Third, remember, you are not just a student. Make time for family, friends and relaxation. If you are stressed, or feel like you are neglecting other responsibilities, you will not be able to focus on your studies. When you do sit down to study, consider trying the following suggestions: * Divide the material into manageable sections and plan to study one section each day (1-2 hours). * Depending on how much material you have to study, start...
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...Smarthinking's E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking's OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hello there, Ramesh! My name is Erin I., and I will be helping you with your persuasive essay on today video games. Let's begin! *Strengths of the essay: First of all, I would like to commend you on this part of your first paragraph: The most generally utilized "positive" effect feature diversions are said to have on youngsters is that they may enhance a player's manual mastery and PC education. Continually enhancing innovation likewise gives players better illustrations that give a more "sensible" virtual playing knowledge. Providing background details about the impact of video games to children familiarizes your readers with your subject. This can prepare them for the discussions you will have in the rest of your paper, which helps them have a better understanding of your draft. This also makes your essay informative and detailed. Nice work! :) Main Idea/Thesis: Please clarify the kind of essay you are trying to write so that the next tutor can guide you more effectively. Right now, based on your draft, it seems that you are trying to write a persuasive essay on video games, so this is what I will work with. Now,...
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...Student Name | | Course and Section Number | Program of Study | | | Success Plan Assignment Instructions | To complete this assignment: 1. Fill in the information above. 2. Answer all of the questions below; the boxes expand to accommodate your writing. 3. Directions for saving and submitting can be found at the end of this document. | Objective: Demonstrate the ability to utilize relevant resources to complete your program of study; use the online resources that are available as part of the online course. By completing the information below, you are taking accountability and responsibility for your own success! Provide a detailed response to each question using complete sentences. I. Reflect on Your Past Academic Experiences As a Student What are some positive experiences that you have had as a student? | | What are some obstacles you faced in your previous experiences and how did you cope with them? | | II. Identify Your Strengths, Motivations, Obstacles, and Needs What strengths or personal characteristics do you possess that will help you succeed as a college student? | | What is your biggest motivation for completing your college education? | | What is one skill that you would like to learn in this course? | | What life responsibilities and challenges do you face as a college student? How will you overcome these obstacles? | | III. Contact Information and Back-up Options What type of assistance...
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...Going back to school can be intimidating. This can be especially so with an online program. You have to be cognizant of correct grammar, proper development of an essay, and making certain to give proper credit to any references that you use. Nevertheless, the resources highlighted in this course have eased my transition. Taking advantage of these resources has provided me with the support I need to be more confident in this writing-based program. Some of the resources addressed in this course are as follows: EasyBib, Smarthinking, paperrater.com, your facilitator, and your academic advisor. EasyBib is a website that provides the necessary references you need to credit work that you use for research. Smarthinking and paperrater.com are both tools that give you "an extra set of eyes" to look over your work for mistakes that you may have overlooked, and to help with literary suggestions (Chambers, 2015). If you are having a difficult time understanding the material or the assignments required of you, your facilitator is just a message or call away from giving you direct guidance. Also, you can go to your academic advisor for guiding your future plan of study to help strengthen any problem areas you have accordingly....
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...Smarthinking's E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking's OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! *Strengths of the essay: Hello Nicole! My name is Kevin S, and I will be your e-structor for your submission on Literacy Behind Bars. Good job in providing a thesis statement for your paper. The main point of Malcolm X essay is he became knowledgeable, about his ignorance due to (1) imprisonment in Charlestown Prison, (2) his mental awakening from words, (3) freedom from self. This helps guide the readers in how you would go about in your discussion. Nicely done! Now, I have a few suggestions on your content, organization, and grammar to help further improve on your summary and response paper. Let’s get started! *NICOLE 7271586 has requested that you respond to the Content Development: You might want to elaborate on some of your points a bit more for the readers to understand them much better. Let’s have a look at your point here on his imprisonment for example: Malcolm X was sent to Charlestown Prison, which I think was the best thing to happen to him. Normally prison is the end result, yet this was the beginning for Malcolm X; it changed the course of his life. All of mankind is destined to change at some point...
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...SMARTHINKING's E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing SMARTHINKING's OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! *Strengths of the essay: Welcome, Jenny! My name is Elizabeth R. I’ll be helping you with strengthening your memorandum about the decision to give the donated heart to Jerry. Now, let’s take a look at your draft, starting with a strength. Your presentation of each candidate is clear with a balanced discussion of the pros and cons of each claim. *Jenny 5806136 has requested that you respond to the Main Idea/Thesis: The memorandum should tell the reader exactly what the issue is and give all the essential information in the subject line and in the first sentence of the first paragraph. Your subject and first sentence are too general: * Transplanting Organs * The purpose of this memorandum is to inform you that the recipient of the organ transplant has been chosen. Your memo is not about organ transplants in general; it is about the decision to give a heart to Jerry. What will you say in the subject line to tell your readers exactly what the memo is about? Avoid an announcement style in your first sentence. Instead, state the topic. For example, “The committee has decided to implement three changes to improve...
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...Running head: CREATING SUCCESS Running head goes in the paper header on the same line as the page number. The words “Running head:” go only on the title page. 1 Creating Success: APA Sample Ima Student Chamberlain College of Nursing NR 351: Transitions in Professional Nursing Fall B, 2011 CREATING SUCCESS Running head is the short title with no more than 50 letters 2 Creating Success: APA Sample The full title goes here, centered, but not bold. Paragraph one is the introduction to the paper. It should begin with something that will grab the reader’s attention and provide a citation to support your opening sentence (Norwood, 2002). Next, support that opening sentence with discussion or explanation with one or multiple sentences which will make up the body of the introductory paragraph. The last sentence of the introduction should highlight areas to be covered in the paper. APA success requires knowledge of the format and skill in concise, clear written communication. Use an ampersand (&) to connect two authors from the same source in parentheses Preparing to Write A Level 1 heading is centered and bold A key to quality construction of a systematic approach to writing is developing an outline that includes all assignment criteria (Hacker & Jones, 2009). Once the outline is created, one can build support by identifying resources that are applicable to the outline topics. The outline with sources identified and evaluated provides a framework which should...
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