Nowadays, cyber-bullying is turning to be a big and sensitive topic in people’s lives. In the Xiaoyi’s research proposal, she read a related essay called “The Epidemic of Facelessness”. This material mainly discussed the cause of cyber-bullying phenomenon is “the huge pressures from real life”. With detailed analysis of the corresponding reading throughout the whole essay, Xiaoyi wrote bullying’s definition in her own point of view. She provides a recent hot issue around a Taiwan girl to illustrate how bad the cyber-bullying situation would be. By analyzing both additional reading and related example, she finally comes up with a conclusion that “ ‘facelessness’ being beneficial or harmful to our cultural and social development.” In my opinion,