托福作文归纳
TPO1 作文
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复述作文
The lecture claims ……
This claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage which suggests ……
The reading passage, by contrast, suggests ……
The second point of difference between the lecture and the reading passage concerns XX（名词）

For the sake of …… （为了XX的利益）
Under new policy
The reading passage contends……(=argues)
On the contrary （相反地）

这篇写作拼错3个词。

大作文
大学该不该在体育/课外活动上投入和教室、图书馆一样多的钱？

凑字数可以
Some people claims …… as ……
Have an obligation to
Build a career
Develop a sense of belonging
Good stress reducers
Be at the heart of the university
By no means（绝不）
I maintain ……
Prepare sb. for sth.
Equip sb. with sth.

这篇字数不够。
From my opinion (这种错误不要犯)
On campus (注意介词)

无老师作文
如果经常用give have get make let use 这些词，其实你的用词非常不准确。
Have 在表示有这个概念时，其实常常用with, in这些词表示；
The one thing I am quite sure=there would be an inevitable result that they will
Use 想想能不能用 play a XX role in 代替

Aside from availability and efficiency, another notable benefit of sending the teens to part-time jobs to help them grow up is it informs them of the right concept and meaning of money. Taking an overview of Chinese situation in this case, most young people (the majority of the youth这就是差别) ask parents for pocket money without shouldering household chores and they take it as granted.(认为XX理所当然) To find a part-time job such as waiter or cook can equip them with the ability of managing their own budget to make ends meet. Meanwhile, it informs them of the truth that money is the exchange of devotion and perspiration instead of a pie from the sky.

However, apart from …… there exists more valuable and essential qualities in successful people. In the first place, people have to 你也别总用should be persistent to the career they chose in order to achieve the peak of their lives. For instance, Madame Curie and her husband had already stayed in her humid laboratory for ten years before she discovered the radial element and got nominated for the Nobel Prize 获得提名. What’s more，creativity (a creative mind) is indispensible. Without the great creativity, Steve Jobs would never be able to transfer magnificent ideas into products like iMac and iPhone, which totally change people’s lifestyle and he would never be the greatest CEO in the past ten years. Last but not least, a great sense of responsibility is the necessity, especially for a successful businessman. Success can never be gained on one’s own. The patience must be paid to overcome all the difficulties on the path to success.

TPO5 W
In terms of XX, the reading and listening are contradictory to each other.
Firstly, the writer makes the point that ……
However, the professor demonstrates a different idea that ……
What’s more, contrary to the belief in the reading passage that ……, the lecture says that ……
The author states that……
In contrast, the speaker refutes that ……

Proposes three theories as likely explanation of the primary function of XX
The lecture, however, points to the inaccuracies in each of these theories.
In contradiction with XX
The Reading, however, draws comparisons between the Chaco houses and other similar large Residential structures in support of the Residential theory.
XX is also rejected by the lecture.
The lecture contends that …… does not offer sufficient proof that ……

Undeniable 不可否认的
In the long run
No sweet without sweat
Perusing a successful life is nothing more than making wise decisions, and by wise we mean the choice of doing necessary first.

综合写作：
第一段指出reading和listening 是对立的，第二三四段说明是如何对立的，最后一段总结确实是对立关系。
The lecture discusses …… which differs from the main idea in the reading that ……
The professor made the point that …… The reading, in contrast, held a different view.
Another important point showed in the listening material is that …… but the reading presents a conflicting idea that ……
Finally the professor stated that …… which challenges the standpoint made by the writer who said that ……
In general, the professor discussed the