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Valley Forge:Do or Die Death, injury, sickness, and cold plagues us, the soldiers at Valley Forge. Will you stay or leave? In December of 1777 General Washington of the Continental Army brought me, you, and all of our comrades. We set up camp here in Valley Forge to fight in the American Revolution. You are a soldier at Valley Forge will you quit? Do you want go home and not re-enlist? Do you want to re-enlist and stay to fight? Don’t desert the general if you don’t re-enlist he’ll understand. He is a good man. Listen to what I have to say or listen to Paine to decide. I have decided to not re-enlist for three reasons which are death and sickness, …show more content…
On December 14, 1777 Dr. Albigence Waldo the surgeon wrote in his diary while he helped assessed me. I saw over his shoulder as he wrote in his journal. He wrote “begins to grow sickly … continued fatigues…”(doc C).It was all bad stuff, stuff that was horrible and happening now “nasty cloaths… nasty cookery” (Doc C). Believe me when I say its true and we all know it. My friends there are estimates of a four thousand soldier decrease in a three months. There is also a seven hundred increase in death due to illness. This reason is causing me to not re-enlist. I would much rather be alive and healthy at home instead of in the cold sick or dead. What would you do? Do you really want to stay here in this cabin choked sick and near …show more content…
Our friends are dying to fight a losing battle that could have been us out there in the field this morning. In our count of soldiers in February I helped General Washington I noticed a four thousand decrease in our troops. There is also an increase in soldiers that are unable to fight (doc A). This reason is causing me to not re-enlist because I don’t want to fight a losing battle. I don’t want to fight a war where there is a strong chance I will lose my life and my family will lose me. You can lose your life your family can lose you! Look at the bodies that lie on the field do you want one of them to be you to die without your family! Our army is going fast and if General Washington doesn't stop it we will all

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