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Fred to Wanna Be

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|Student/Group Name(s) Team A |Date 6/21/11 |
|Course GEN/200 |Assignment WS 4 |

Content/Development
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|Subject Matter: | |
|Key elements of assignments covered | |
|Content is comprehensive/accurate/persuasive |Major points supported by details/examples |
|Displays an understanding of relevant theory |Key elements covered |
|Major points supported by specific details/examples |Detailed references |
|Research is adequate/timely |TOTAL: 2 |
|Writer has gone beyond textbook for resources |VALUE: 2 PTS |
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|Higher-Order Thinking: | |
|Writer compares/contrasts/integrates theory/subject matter with work |Developed ideas and concepts |
|environment/experience |Subject matter comparison made |
|At an appropriate level, the writer analyzes and synthesizes theory/practice to | |
|develop new ideas and ways of conceptualizing and performing |TOTAL: 2 |
| |VALUE : 2 PTS |

Organization
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|The introduction provides a sufficient background on the topic and previews major | |
|points |Good introduction – clear purpose |
|Central theme/purpose is immediately clear |Conclusion restated purpose |
|Structure is clear, logical, and easy to follow |Easy to follow |
|Subsequent sections develop/support the central theme | |
|Conclusion/recommendations follow logically from the body of the paper |TOTAL: 2 |
| |VALUE: 2 PTS |

Style/Mechanics
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|Format--10% | |
|Citations/reference page follow guidelines |FORMAT: 2.5 / 3 |
|Properly cites ideas/info from other sources |References and in-text citations included – recommend review of APA sample paper |
|Paper is laid out effectively--uses, heading and other reader-friendly tools |Neat submission |
|Paper is neat/shows attention to detail | |
| |GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: 3 / 3 |
|Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling--10% |Correct spelling, minor punctuation errors |
|Rules of grammar, usage, punctuation are followed |rules of grammar followed |
|Spelling is correct | |
| |READABILITY/STYLE: 3 / 3 |
|Readability/Style--10% |Good transitions between paragraphs |
|Sentences are complete, clear, and concise |Appropriate tone |
|Sentences are well-constructed with consistently strong, varied structure |TOTAL: 8.5 |
|Transitions between sentences/paragraphs/sections help maintain the flow of thought |CATEGORY VALUE: 9 PTS |
|Words used are precise and unambiguous | |
|The tone is appropriate to the audience, content, and assignment | |

Comments / Grade

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|CONTENT/DEVELOPMENT: 4 / 4 |
|ORGANIZATION: 2 / 2 |
|STYLE/MECHANICS: 8.5 / 9 |
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|TOTAL: 14.5 / 15 |

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